focus - jaadu hai

focus

focus is like a
body of water fighting
evaporation.

on: May 14th, 2009
type: post
in: lines
8 comments

Comments

Excellent simile.

by: Asmaa
on: May 21st, 2009

good one !!

by: mystic
on: May 23rd, 2009

thanks folk.

by: adnan.
on: May 23rd, 2009

A wonderful haiku!

by: Geetha
on: May 25th, 2009

meaning, its hard to lose focus, because a body of water don't ewaporate for a long time?

by: sophister
on: May 28th, 2009

@Geetha - thanks!

@sophister - no.

by: adnan.
on: May 28th, 2009

All of that was misspelled and grammatically inaccurate on purpose.

by: sophister
on: May 28th, 2009

@sophister - it's still a no.

by: adnan.
on: May 28th, 2009