your smile

i would fall
a thousand times over,
just to see you smile again.
i would marry just your smile,
then i'd brush up on my poetry
so that everyday
i could recite
the thousand words
that your smile is worth.

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uff, adnan.. beautiful.

wow!

hmm.
why is this one smile worth a thousand words?
sweet, but superficial, non? (:

yes, it is.

could be a few words, or one, or none.

thousand is relevant here for a few reasons, because the second line indicates falling a "thousand times over". So the second last line has "a thousand words" to mirror that.

also it goes with the saying that a picture is worth a thousand words, though that is not really directly (or even indirectly) implied here.

@anjum and gurly - thanks.

swoon

=)

so sweet! :)

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