reminders

maghrib mein ho gareeb, to mashriq mein kya ameer thay
gintee tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai

par sukoon ab na raha, raatein khojati hai
neend tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai

karti hai baatein tumhari, diloon ko sab ke tang
sharam tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai

thodh ke apna ghuroor, karlo khuda ko yaad kabhi
par duaaein tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai


Thanks to mystic for contributing the second sher. Although I did modify it a little. I may not have completed the rest of it if you hadn’t asked. so thanks! =)

Hmmm… I want to actually go into an explanation of this. At the same time I don’t. I want folk to read and interpret as they may.

So I’ll say just one thing, yes it’s harsh. It was written as a reminder for us all, so we realize certain things that we should do, and certain things that we should avoid.

1 Comment

  1. yes, it’s a little harsh, a bit of a punch to the gut, as if it hits too close to home, which it sort of does for me. but that’s a good thing. because i always need reminders.

    thank you for starting (and continuing) this, and to mystic as well for contributing to what’s become a collaborative effort.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published.

*

© 2017 jaadu hai

Theme by Anders NorenUp ↑